短文改错(共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分)下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在
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短文改错(共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分)
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Today I was having a PE lesson while I fell down and hurted my foot. I was in great pain at that moment, but I tried to act as if nothing had happened until the class is over. Though I had difficulty walk back to my classroom, but I still didn’t tell anyone and even refused the offer of help from my classmate. As the result, the hurt in my foot became worse. Now I know I was wrong. We can tell other our need for help and accept their help. Someday we can help him in return. In this way, we can get along with each other happy and peacefully. |
答案
小题1:while改为when
小题2:hurt改为hurted
小题3:is改为was
小题4:walk改为walking
小题5:去掉but
小题6:classmate改为classmates
小题7:the改为a
小题8:other改为others
小题9:him改为them
小题10:happy改为happily |
解析
试题分析：
小题1:while改为when 连词while后面的谓语动词要使用延续性动词，本句后面的动词fall down是一个短暂性动词，故使用when来连接。
小题2:hurt改为hurted 本句中的动词hurt的过去式和过去分词和原形是一样的。
小题3:is改为was 本文是一般过去时为主的，故使用一般过去式的时态。
小题4:walk改为walking 固定搭配have some difficulty doing sth做某事有困难。
小题5:去掉but 连词though不能与but连用。
小题6:classmate改为classmates 这里是指多个同学classmates.
小题7:the改为a 固定搭配as a result结果是。
小题8:other改为others 这里的others是名词其他人，指告诉其他人我们的要求。
小题9:him改为them 这里的them是指上句的others，故使用复数形式。
小题10:happy改为happily 本句中的副词happily做状语修饰动词短语get along with each other
点评：本题考查较为细致，要求考生要特别耐心答题中注意句子中人称和数是否一致，时态是否一致。各种词性之间的区别以及一些常用句型，固定短语的应用。一般的这类题型不会出现太复杂的单词和句子，这类题型考察基础知识较多。平时应注重积累，熟记一些句型及惯用结构。修改前先细读短文，标出出错的位置，改完以后还得细读短文，看看改过后的短文是否语意通顺，符合逻辑。 |
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短文改错（满分10分）
文中共有10处语言错误，增加：在此处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出修改的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
I"m glad to recommend (推荐) you to my friend Li Ming. Li Ming was
born in July 15, 1974, in Beijing. He graduated from Xisi Primary School in 1986.
When he was in the middle school, he did good in maths, physics and
chemistry and fond of art. After graduating from No. 4 High School, he
entered into Beijing University to study physics. After four year of hard work
there, he went to the United States for further study. Because of his
excellent work, he get a doctor"s degree in physics in this year. He is
now in good health but would like to make contributions to our country．I
will be most gratefully if you consider my recommendation．
Looking forward to receive your early reply
Yours truly,
Wang Lin |
七选五(每小题2分, 满分10分) 根据短文内容, 从短文后的选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项, 并在答题卡上将该项涂黑。选项中有两项为多余选项。
1 When a starving man gets a meal, he begins to think about an overcoat; when an executive（业务主管）gets a new sports car, visions of country clubs dance into view. The many wants of mankind might be regarded as making up several levels. 2 .The first and most basic levels of wants involve food. Once this want is satisfied, a second level of wants appears: clothing and some sort of shelter. By the end of World War II these wants were satisfied for a great majority of Americans. 3 It included such items as automobiles and new houses. By 1957 or 1958 this third level of wants was fairly well satisfied. Then, in the late 1950s a fourth level of wants appeared: the “life-enriching” level. While the other levels involve physical satisfaction－the feeding, comfort, safety, and transportation of the human body－this level stresses mental needs for recognition, achievement and happiness. It includes a variety of goods and services, many of which could be called “luxury”(奢侈) items. Among them are vacation trips, the best medical care, and entertainment. 4 On this level, a greater percentage of consumer spending goes to services, while on the first three levels more is spent on goods. Will consumers raise their sights to a fifth level of wants as their income increases, or will they continue to demand luxuries and personal services on the fourth level? A fifth level probably would involve wants that can be achieved best by community action. Consumers may be spending more on taxes to pay for government action against disease, ignorance, crime and prejudice. 5 In this way, we can enjoy more fully the good things on the first four levels.| A．Then a third level appeared. | | B．Human wants seem endless. | | C．When there is money enough to satisfy one level of wants, another level appears. | | D．There are several levels of wants in one’s life. |
E．At this stage, we now may seek to ensure the health, safety, and leisure.
F．Also included here are fancy foods and the latest styles in clothing.
G．Different people have different wants on each level. |
写作（共两节，满分35分） 第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分） 此题要求改正所给短文的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上划一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正： 该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。 该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。 该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。 注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Dear Jin Jing，
Your problem is common one among middle school students．Maybe the following advices can help you．First in all，believe in yourself．Your greatest problem is that you lack of self-confidence．You should smile at your classmates．One smile speaks loud about your wish to make friends than any word．Your smile will show that you are friendly to him．Next, trying talking with a student who is as shy as you or who share the same interest as you．You can discuss your studies with a classmate，and you can also talk about your hobbies. Unless anyone is in trouble, you should be ready to help him or her．Once you have confidence, you can make as many friends as possibly． |
短文改错（每小题1.5分，共15分）
下文中共有10处错误。在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），并在其下面写出该加的词。把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.
We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.
It is such great hotel that I will recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing. |
根据短文内容，从短文后的选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项。选项中有两项为多余选项。
Every person has a great deal of love to give. 小题1: Here is a general guide to loving.
Say it. When you say the words “I Love You”, make sure you really mean it, and are willing to do anything for that special person.
小题2: If you love someone, you should understand how they feel, where they come from, and who they are. Realize how they could also love you back just as well.
Love unconditionally. Giving unconditional love requires you to love without any expectations. 小题3: It seems difficult to only love and not demand anything in return in today’s world where everyone is selfish. But even in this world we see many examples of unconditional love, for example the love a mother gives to her child and the love between two life partners. To love unconditionally, you will have to learn to sacrifice(牺牲) yourself and your desires and also realize that someone may have a different way of showing his or her love for you. 小题4:
Realize it can be lost. If you realize that you can lose the one you love, then you have a greater appreciation of what you have. 小题5: Don’t make an idol of the person you love. This will place them under unnecessary pressure and will likely result in you losing them.
Never stop loving. Even if you have been hurt before, you should not stop giving love.| A．Try loving just for the sake of love. | | B．Put yourself in someone else’s shoes. | | C．There are many different ways to explain love. | | D．Think how lucky you are to have someone to love. |
E. Do not expect to be loved back in exactly the same way.
F. It does not make you a bad person to desire someone else’s love.
G. There are many different ways to love someone (or even yourself). |
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