短文改错       假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文,文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,错误涉及一个单词的增加、删

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短文改错
       假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文,文中共有
10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,错误涉及一个单词的增加、删减或修改.
   增加: 在缺词处加一个漏词符号, 并在其下面写出该加的词.
   删除: 把多余的词用斜线 划掉.
   修改: 在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
   注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词.
             2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.Dear Zhou Lu,
     I"m writing a letter ask you for some help.
     As you know, Zhang Fei and I used to be good friend. However, on one day, Zhang Fei read my
private letter in secret and tell others what was written in it. Knowing this, I was extreme angry. I told
her I would not be his friend any more. Hearing whatＩsaid, Zhang felt very surprised and no longer
stayed with me. Facing with this, I felt very upset. I am much angry with her improper behaviour, but I
can"t forget the wonderful time that I stayed with her. I wonder whether I should forgive her. And I"m
afraid if I offer to make friends with her, she will refuse me. How should I do?
                                                                                                                                   Your friend,
                                                                                                                                       Li Hua
                                                                                                                                                               

答案

Dear Zhou Lu,
     I"m writing a letter ∧ask you for some help.
                                1. to
     As you know, Zhang Fei and I used to be good friend. However, on one day, Zhang Fei read 
                                                                          2.  friends        3. 去掉on
my private letter in secret and tell others what was written on it. Knowing this, I was extreme
                                         4. told                                                                        5. extremely
angry. I told her I would not be his friend any more. Hearing what I said, Zhang felt very surprised
                                            6. her
and no longer stayed with me. Facing with this, I felt very upset. I am much angry with her
                                               7. 去掉with                                     8. very
improper behaviour, but I can"t forget the wonderful time that I stayed with her. I wonder whether I 
                                                                                      9. when
should forgive her. And I"m afraid if I offer to make friends with her, she will refuse me. How
                                                                                                                                  10. What
should I do?
                                                                                                                         Your friend,
                                                                                                                               Li Hua
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