某海外学校举办英语训练营，开设了以下课程：园艺（gardening），烹饪（cooking），防身术（self-defense），护理（nursing ）。假设

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某海外学校举办英语训练营，开设了以下课程：园艺（gardening），烹饪（cooking），防身术（self-defense），护理（nursing ）。假设你是李华，写封申请信，报名参加其中一门课程的学习。
内容要点：1. 你感兴趣的课程；2. 你期望从中学到什么；3.为什么想学这些内容
Dear sir /madam,
                                                                                         
                                                                                         
        
Li Hua

答案

Dear sir /madam,
I am very glad that your school will hold the English summer camp which contains many courses, such as gardening, cooking, self-defense, nursing and so on.
I want to register  to attend a course about gardening because I have liked  flowers, grasses etc since  I was a little child. I especially like playing in the garden where I can enjoy the beauty of nature. For one thing, I want to gain a bit more knowledge of gardening so that it can help me to major in the gardening after attending college. For another, I can realize the bitterness of the gardeners and treasure plants much more consequently. What‘s more, after graduation, I plan to devote my life to cultivate flowers and grasses to turn our country into a more beautiful state, attracting more foreigners to come to visit it.
Yours,
Li Hua

解析

考察应用文
【写作指导】
本文属于应用文写作，要求写一封申请信，报名参加一项课程。使用第三人称和一般现在时。要点：1. 你感兴趣的课程：园艺；2.希这个课程让我了解到更多与园艺有关的知识。3.为什么想学这些内容：期望园艺能够帮助我在大学里的专业学的更好，而且未来自己也想从事于园艺有关的事业；
写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题。
【一句多译】
而且，毕业以后，我计划把我的时间花在种植花草，让我们的祖国更加漂亮吸引更多的人来参观。
①[What‘s more, after graduation, I plan to devote my life to cultivate flowers and grasses to turn our country into a more beautiful state, attracting more foreigners to come to visit it.
②What‘s more, after graduation, I plan to devote my life to cultivate flowers and grasses to turn our country into a more beautiful state to attract more foreigners to come to visit it.