请根据以下提示，结合生活中的一个事例，围绕optimism用英语写一篇短文。Optimism is the faith that leads to achiev

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请根据以下提示，结合生活中的一个事例，围绕optimism用英语写一篇短文。
Optimism is the faith that leads to achievement. Nothing can be done without hope and confidence. ( Helen Keller)
注意：
1、无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；
2、除诗歌之外，文体不限；
3、内容必须结合生活中的一个事例；
4、文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；
5、词数为120左右。

答案

Optimism is important in all aspects of our life. If you can change your mind from pessimism, you can change your life.
Up to the beginning of Senior Grade Two, I did poorly in my English but I didn’t give in because I was always encouraged by both the people around me and myself. I kept practicing speaking, listening, reading and writing. When I was fed up with reading or writing, I usually entertained myself by reading some interesting English stories, jokes and humors or seeing English films. When I had some trouble in reciting or memorizing, I tried to amuse myself by playing word games or singing English songs. By this means, I always made myself cheerful and optimistic, full of splendid and colorful dreams of future. I kept practicing. Gradually, I made progress in my English. .
Thanks to the optimism, I have become one of the top students in my class by now.

解析

试题分析：本文写作属于提出主题，然后对主题进行发挥题型。这类题型给学生腾出了很宽的写作空间。对于本文的写作，首先说明乐观的重要性，然后结合自己生活中的事例，比如自己在学英语过程中自己是如何通过积极的做法来保持乐观的，再说明这种做法给我的学习带了很大的好处，最终我得以成功或提高。最后进行一句话的总结，这样文章就比较完美了。
点评：对于高三的写作，写的过程中注意避免使用中式英文，要对所写的句子变换表达，对于表达内容层次时需要使用平时积累的层次关系的短语，多使用被动，倒装、虚拟来提升作文的美度。在平时写作时应该多进行阅读，对阅读过程中写的好的表达要进行积累，并且学以致用，勤积累，多背诵，这样才能作文才能稳步的提升。