The weather in my hometown

题目

The weather in my hometown
My hometown is in Zhanjiang city.It is a nice place.
In spring the weather is warm.Sometime it rains.The trees and grass are green.I like spring.In summer it is very hot.We go swimming.We have a long summer holiday.We are very happy.In autumn the weather is cool.It is usually windy.Sometime it rains.I like autumn,too.In winter it is cold.In some places,it snows.But it doesn’t snow in Zhanjiang.We wear coats.I don’t like winter.
This is the weather in my hometown.I like it.
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答案

places, it snows. But it doesn’t snow in Zhanjiang. We wear coats. I don’t
前面 doesn 后面 I don’t