There are so many people talking about how much their mother love them,whereas seldom people realiz

题目

There are so many people talking about how much their mother love them,whereas seldom people realiz
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There are so many people talking about how much their mother love them,whereas seldom people realize how much love their father give them.In fact,father's love is as strong as mother's,but as usual,Father's love is deep and silent,that's why most people think their father love them less.but you will notice your father is always there when you need him appear,though they never said it out loud how much they love you,So we should love our father速度

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问题如下：
1.their father 后面　+ S
2.出现了好几个but,而且不同与though　不能同时用；
3.most people 　建议修改成　most of children
3.英语不是很地道,有点像chinglish
but you will notice your father is always there when you need him appear,though they never said it out loud how much they love you,So we should love our father
建议这样说：If you pay more attention to your father,you will realize that your father is always there when you need him.They never told you how much they love you,but they show their love in actions.So we should love our fathers.