一首自己写的英语诗,

题目

一首自己写的英语诗,
写的不好,见笑...Rainblow In a fantastic dream .You're are dancing on the sky .As a angel fall into mortal's world .Words lose there meaning .中文翻译:在美丽的梦中,你在天际舞蹈,像一个跌落人间的天使,所有赞美都失去意义.(请赐教!)

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恩,这个好像有点小错误吧!tile:rainbow(彩虹)In a fantastic dream;You are dancing in the sky;As a angel fall into the world；Word loses their meaning.对了,严格讲,英文诗也讲究韵脚的,比如第一句最后一个词是...