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2003年GDP比上年增长13.1%；全社会固定资产投资增长42.1%；外贸出口总额增长37.3%；实际吸收外商直接投资增长60%；地方财政一般预算收入增长30.7 %.有在建或已签约项目投资总额380多亿元.高效廉洁政府建设初见成效,社会文化各项事业取的重大进展.
In 2003,the GDP of Yunfu increased by 13.1% over the previous year,the total fixed asset investment of the whole society by 42.1%,total value of foreign export by 37.3%,foreign investment in actual use by 60%,and local financial revenue of general budget by 30.7%.Contracted investment projects and those under construction have reached a value of over 38 billion RMB Yuan.High efficient and upright government system has come into being.Great progress has been achieved in social and cultural undertakings.
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In 2003,Yunfu’s GDP increased by 13.1% over the previous year,total investment in fixed asset by 42.1%,gross foreign export value by 37.3%,actual absorbed FDI (foreign direct investment) [in actual use实际利用] by 60%,and general budget revenue for local public finance by 30.7%.The total investment in on-going and contracted projects exceeds RMBY38 billion.Initial success has been achieved in construction of an efficient and clean-handed government,and remarkable progress made in various social and cultural undertakings.
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