invitation letter谁写过

题目

invitation letter谁写过
全家想去美国玩儿,需要美国的朋友写一个invitation letter,但他写的太简单了,如下：
I am happy to invite you and your family to visit me and my family at my home in California, NY any time from September 1, 2009 to October 31, 2009. I look forward to seeing you and your family again!
希望有写过的人可以指导一下,主要是充实一下,这样太简单了.
ps：用英文充实.（或者如果你知道比较好的写法,如果不知道英文怎么写,给出中文意见也可.）

答案

invitation letter 并不需要很复杂的,主要交代清楚邀请对象,时间,地点,以及邀请方就可以了,下面提供的还是比较中国思维化.
Invitation
dear ***,
I will be pleased to see you and your families to visit my family in NY City,California.You can come here at any time between 1st September and 31st October ,2009.
best wishes
yours,
***