英语求救啦,这句话里是不是应该把what he considers 删掉才准确呢,

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英语求救啦,这句话里是不是应该把what he considers 删掉才准确呢,
In his writing,John Crowe Ransom describes the spiritual barrenness of society brought about by science and technology.
John Crowe Ransom（约翰?科洛?兰瑟姆）在他的著作中描述了他认为是由科学技术给社会带来的精神贫困.

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不能删.In his writing,John Crowe Ransom describes what he considers the spiritual barrenness of society brought about by science and technology.1、译文：约翰·克劳·兰塞姆在他的著作中描述了他认为是由...