帮我看看有没有语法错误、

题目

帮我看看有没有语法错误、
There is a beautiful park near my house.During the summer holiday I often go to there.
The park is not veru big,but it’s very beautiful.There are lots of trees and flowers.In the summer,these trees grow very exuberant,It is cooler under the trees.
Oh,there is a big lake in the park .
Let’s go and have a look!
The weather was very hot.So many people go to there.They like swimming in the lake,but I think it’s very dangerous.
Ther take their dogs for a walk in the park,they all have a good time in the park.

答案

第一行：去掉“to”
第四行：去掉“the”或改成“summertime”(固定搭配)
第四行：“cooler”改成“cool”
第七行：“was”改成“is”
So many people go to there中删to
(顺便提醒一下,here、there、home前面不加任何介词）