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In March 28th,a mining accident happened in wangjialing mine.this was one of mining accidents in March.It tensed up our hearts again.Though many people go to the rescue,we still see a lot of dead.153 people trapped in this mine disaster,and there was no informathion in 8 nights.We are disheartened to think that this will be also a sorrowful story.
The miracle of life occurred in the Ching Ming Festival,115 workers rescued one by one.all of the people was cheering for the strong life.Today we are still working to rescue,we never give up,because we still pray for the living life.
In 2006,the tv player soldiers’ sudden attack let us know a word :never abundon nor give up.It fire up everybody who against difficulties.A very ordinary soldier prove the word,because of his hard-working and insistence.He get what he wanted.In this mining accident,Both of the rescue team and the trapped person are not give up,so they also get it.The life saved because they insist.

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1.we still see a lot of dead.我觉得dead应该改为death.2.153 people trapped in this mine disaster.trapped前面应该加上were,因为是被动.3.and there was no informathion in 8 nights中的in 应改为at4.115 worke...