帮我看看我的文法对不对

题目

帮我看看我的文法对不对
还有,帮我把有中文字的地方转成英文,一定要文法对~
A:Hi,Ppeggy what are you looking at?
B:This is my idol,A:your idol?Hum… she is very handsome /beautiful,but I don’t recognize her.Is she /he Mary
B:no,she is Lily
A:Lily,does she come form Hong Kong
B:no,she/he cones from China
A:on!I see.She is a Chinese singer
B:yes!
A:which song is her famous?
B:hum…she /he have many songs,and his/her the most famous song is apple .Have you even listened?
A:yes.I have listened.I remembered that 这首歌攞过奖的.
B:do you like it?
A:yes.I like it very much!Does she have any discs?系只佢有冇出过唱片
B:yes.she has had more than three discs,and I also have two her discs
A:He looks very young.Does she/he married?
B:yes
A:我好以在电影上见过他,他有没有拍过任何的电影
B:yes/no.he/she 拍过 cats
A:她真厉害.Have She performed any concerts?
B:yes.In April 2008,She performed one concerts
帮我看看我的文法对不对
还有,帮我把有中文字的地方转成英文,一定要文法对~

答案

A:Hi,Peggy what are you looking at?B:This is my idol,A:your idol?Hum… she is very handsome /beautiful,but I don’t recognize her.Is she /he Mary B:no,she is Lily A:Lily,does she come from Hong Kong B...