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英文作文修改
This is a special football match, the football of which is an old father, whose four children act as gatekeepers. What they click is symbolic of duty of looking after their father in his old days.
China is famous for its long and highly-developed traditional culture, including respecting the old and taking caring of their parents. With the sharp change of society brought by economic growth, some evil phenomenon occur in our country, just as the picture above shown. Devoted all their love,energy and hope in their life to us, they should be given consideration carefully. It not only is required by our laws, but also reflects a person's morality. No ever cultural society could tolerate the durable existence of the abnormal phenomenon.
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what their clickDevoted all their loves,energies and hopes in their lives to us.It is not only equired by our lawssome evil phenomenaabnormal phenomenap.s.i think you can use“ such as” to replace “...