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We should learn to look after ourselves.This is very important.Our parents bcome elder and elder that they can't take good care of us.Whenever this time,we must learn to look after ourselver.I learn something important from it such as how to love ourselves,how to cook food,how to clean the room and how to be responsible for others.I will grow from it.
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一二句混合一下 It is important for us to learn how to look after ourselves..Our parents bcome elder and elder :have becomewe must learn to look after ourselver :We want to learn to take good care of y...