求一英语作文,题目"Money is not everything",首提出Correction of one idea,然后present another idea

题目

求一英语作文,题目"Money is not everything",首提出Correction of one idea,然后present another idea

答案

As we all known,there are so many people think that money is everything.They struggled for money their whole life.However, in my opinion, money doesn’t mean everything. You may ask why,then I will tell you the reason.
Many people view that the richer, the happier.But,does money can really bring the true happiness?Of course it can afford many things but not everything.You can buy a house but not family,you can buy a rose but not love. There are still something it can not afford.And,the 'something' means the true happiness.
And money is not the real treasure.The real treasures in the world,including heath, care, wisdom, courage, are all impossible to be exchanged.One would lose the way if he or she gets addicted in money. When facing money, they would forget their real treasures. The only thing they are likely to conduct is trying every means to get money, deceiving, stealing, robbing or even killing.In that case,money is the bad thing.
We shouldn't be the servant of money but the user.Because money is not everything but a tool.