求帮忙修改英语语法错误

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求帮忙修改英语语法错误
Dear Professor Haruko:
I have read some of your lastest papers.And what made me interested in is the application of microbe.As is known to all,the sea is the cradle of biology.Most of Marine biological resources is waiting for human to develop.And it become more and more important ,range from the fermentation engineering to the genetic engineering.now it has become an important research subject.As you said,many diseases may also be ease or even treated by some marine microorganism.That's wor
th to devoting ourselves to do something about it.
Now let me introduce myself to you.My name is PanHui,born in SEP 17,1989,studied a 4-year underguaduate course at Heilongjiang University Of Traditional Chinese Medicine from SEP 1,2007 to July 10,2011,majoring in food science and engineering.During the university time,i was taking an active part in the extracurricular activities.As opening a shop to help poor student,a local newspaper had an interview with me.Besides,when the May 2008 Sichuan earthquake happened,i organized the first donation with The Red Cross as soon as i can.As a result,i got a badge of red cross.
I was eagerly wish that i can join your research group.Now I am studying at FUJI International Language institute in TOKYO.Would you please consider my application and tell me how can I be enrolled as your gruduate?Thank you very much for your kind assistance.I am looking forward to receiving your reply.

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