帮忙修改英语作文（四级）

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帮忙修改英语作文（四级）
How to Succeed in a Job Interview?
要求：1.面试在求职过程中的作用；2.取得面试成功的因素：仪表、举止谈吐、能力、专业知识、自信、实事求是等等.
How to succeed in a Job Interview
I think ,Job Interview is very impotant when you find jobs.Firstly,Interview Jage can know you about your knowledge、confidence and so on;Second,you can know yourself's weakness.
Job Interview consists of many elements.For example,looks、apperence、ability、knowledge、confidence and so on.I think knowledge is the most important element in Job Interview.It is the basic of our do any jobs.And confidence is very impotant too.Only have we confidence,we can do good jobs.At last,we must trust.Because if you have trust,everyone will appreicate you,then you will have good jobs

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in my opinon ,Job Interview is very impotant when you seek for jobs.(find是找到的意思,不能表示寻找的过程）Firstly,Interview Jage ? can help you to know about your knowledge、confidence and so on;Secondly,you can know your own weakness.
Job Interview include many elements（如果用consist of 我认为写成the success of job interview consist of.,比较符合逻辑）,such as （for example 后面要加句子的）appearence、ability、knowledge、confidence and so on.I think knowledge is the most important element in Job Interview.It is the basic of our do any jobs.（我认为应该是it is the baisc requirement of every job) And confidence is very impotant too.Only when we have confidence, can we do good jobs.At last,we must trust other people.Because if you have trust them,everyone will appreicate you,then you will（can比较好） have good jobs
我认为第二段最好是讲自己的观点的时候,有自己的依据.希望能帮到你