麻烦修改一下雅思大作文

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麻烦修改一下雅思大作文
Some people believe that the shortage of fossil fuels will lead to the replacement of alternative energy like solar system and wind.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
As the environmental problems on this planet become increasingly serious,finding the replacement for traditional fossil fuels has been discussed for quite a long time,and therefore alternative energy such as solar or wind is being seeing as most hopeful area recently.However,whether alternative energy will take the place of fossil fuels is still debatable.
There are numbers of shortages of fossil fuels we can list,but two of them are mainly concerned by the public.First,the pollution.As we all know,the burning of fossil fuels produces a large quantity of waste substances which can be harmful to our eco-system.Greenhouse effect and climate change are well-known consequences of using fossil fuels.Another shortage of fossil fuels is that the total amount of them is limited,which means we will ru

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