求高手帮我修改这篇英语作文(CET4) 顺便打一下分数
题目
求高手帮我修改这篇英语作文(CET4) 顺便打一下分数
1、各大学开设了各种各样的选修课
2、学生因为各种原因选择了不同的选修课
3、以你自己为例……
What Electives to Choose
Nowadays,there are various electives in
colleagues and universities that students could choose not only associate whit
their professional but also their interest in.
Reasons for different options,of course,
are in abundance.Some students tend to choose the courses for professional
requirement,they support professional knowledge enhance.Others pay attention
to individual interest,they harbor the idea learning is in order to expanding horizons.
From my own perspective,the ideal is the
two elements combined together.But when I have to make a decision,I would
pick up the best choose to my interest and professional requirement.Only inthis way can we enjoy a enrich campus life.
答案
大概改了一下,原文写的不错,意思很到位,分数不会低.
What Electives to Choose
Nowadays, there are various electives in
colleagues and universities that students could choose not only associate whit
their professional but also their interest in.
这里修改professions和interests
Reasons for different options, of course,
are in abundance. Some students tend to choose the courses for professional
for professional 改成 for job
requirement, they support professional knowledge enhance. Others pay attention
they support改成These courses would enhance their knowledge.
to individual interest, they harbor the idea learning is in order to expanding horizons.
they harbor改成the idea is to expand their visions in particular fields.
From my own perspective, the ideal is the
two elements combined together. But when I have to make a decision, I would
pick up the best choose to my interest and professional requirement. Only inthis way can we
I would 改成 I would pick the most suitable courses to fit into my interest and job requirement.
enjoy a enrich campus life.
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