For what you are here 感激不尽.

题目

For what you are here 感激不尽.

答案

这些题中的错误主要是汉式思维导致的错误以及词语搭配错误.

依次改正为:
Why are you here ? 或 What are you here for ?
why=what...for ; for what 纯粹是汉式表达.
句意: 你为什么在这儿?
1. I am in a bit of hurry .
a bit+形容词; a bit of +名词
句意:我有点匆忙/我有点着急.

2. I'll take/ask her out on a date this Saturday.
【take/ask sb. out on a date】带某人出去约会/邀请某人出来约会.
句意:这周星期六,我要带她出去约会/邀请她出来约会.

3.If someday I am good at English, I will definitely be admitted to it.
【one day→someday】someday 将来有一天; one day （过去或将来的）某一天
【in→at】 be good at 擅长/...学得好
be admitted to 被...录取; 被允许进入
句意: 如果将来有一天我的英语学得好, 我绝对会被这所学校录取的.

4.How do you learn English ? 你怎样学英语吗?(这是最简洁的改法)
或: Do you know how to learn English ? 【去掉the】
句意: 你知道怎样学英语吗?
How do you think to do sth. ? 纯粹是汉式表达. 是错的.
因为一般不能说: think (how) to do sth.

也可改成: How/What do you think of learning English ?
句意: 你对英语学习有什么看法? (如喜不喜欢学, 学起来有不有趣,以及怎样学等)
5.Are you investing【in the】stock market ?
【on→in】invest in "投资于...", 是固定搭配.
【market是可数名词单数,其前加上the表示特指】
句意: 你正在投资股票市场吗?

6.It is difficult【for me】to learn English .
句意:我学英语很困难./对我来说,英语学起来很难.

7.最简单的改法: We have a full day off or half a day off on Sunday.
句意:星期天,我们休全天或半天假.
或改成: We are given the option to work either full or half day on Sunday.
句意:星期天,我们可以选择全天或半天工作.

8. In fact, Billy really has what it takes to be a VIP.
句意: 实际上,比利真的具有成为贵宾所需的条件.
原句属汉式思维.

9.China is in rainy season now.
句意: 中国现在进入了雨季.
原句属汉式表达.