请好心、善良的英语高手帮忙给修改一下,

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请好心、善良的英语高手帮忙给修改一下,
I am really happy to receive your photos.You are a so kind girl whom I will remember forever.
I glanced over your organization‘s website and know you are very busy for the camps one after another.Maybe we are a transience-only a transience of your life,but,for us,at least for me,you just like a brilliant and beautiful rainbow.
Thank you and your photos let me recall the memories of those good times.
Hope you happy and best wishes.

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I am really happy to receive your photos.You are so kind a girl whom I will remember forever.
I have glanced over your organization's website and know you are very busy for the camps one after another.Maybe we are a transience-only a transience of your life,but,for us,at least for me,you are just like a brilliant and beautiful rainbow.
Thank you for your photos again which remind me of the memories of those good times.
Best wishes.