谁能帮我检查下这句话有没有语病

题目

谁能帮我检查下这句话有没有语病
This book is a science fiction novel that written by Lois Lowry.The novel is a "cautionary"tale to us in sereval ways as far as we can link to today's socity.

答案

1 novel that written by Lois Lowry 》 删除that 或者改为novel that was written by Lois Lowry
2 as far as 》 as long as
3 to today's socity 》 to today's society
4 sereval 》 several
This book is a science fiction written by Lois Lowry. The novel is a "cautionary" tale to us in several ways as long as we can link it to today's society