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帮我修改下我的英文report
这篇是我的关于spain的发表文章,帮我修改下吧,把一些复杂的句子改得简单些 容易表达些,如果能在中间加上一些连接词 语气词的话就太感谢了 比如加一些for example.I think 之类的词(^o^）
Etiquette & Customs in Spain
Meeting Etiquette
.When introduced expect to shake hands.
.Once a relationship is established,men may embrace and pat each other on the shoulder.
.Female friends kiss each other on both cheeks,starting with the left.
Table manners
.Remain standing until invited to sit down.You may be shown to a particular seat.
.Do not begin eating until the hostess starts.
.Use utensils to eat most food.Even fruit is eaten with a knife and fork.
.The host gives the first toast.
Religion in Spain
Spain is more or less a Christian nation wherein around 76 percent of the population is part of the Catholic Church,and about 3 percent belongs to the Islam Churc,while only 2 percent belongs to the Protestant Church.non-believers or atheists are about 19 percent of the population,However,there is a good mix of

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