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擅长英语的帮忙看看有没有语法错误
I Love Shimen
I study in Shimen Experimental Middle School.It’s a beautiful school with many trees,flowers and buildings.It’s not very big but it makes us comfortable.This is one of the reasons that I love Shimen.Another reason is Shimen makes me has more confidence and be a clear girl.
When I was in primary school .I was very quiet and my achievement wasn’t very good. I didn’t like to talk with the others , so most classmates didn't like me so I had few friends. At that time,I didn’t have confidence and more and more quiet.
But now I have been an outgoing girl.Because when I entered Shimen Experimental School,the teachers and classmates all believed me and letted me be the monitor of our class,I was very happy and felt that I was useful.
Now I often hand up and answer the teachers’ qustions and attend many activities. I have many friends in our school and classmates all like to talk with me. I usually very busy but I am very happy about my change. So I love Shimen and thank it very much!
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答案
基本没什么错
This is one of the reasons that I love Shimen.
This is one of the reasons why I love Shimen.
Another reason is Shimen makes me has more confidence and be a clear girl.
Another reason is Shimen makes me more confident and clear.
clear在这里表达什么意思呢?
I didn’t like to talk with the others.
I didn’t like to talk to others.
,so most classmates didn't like me so I had few friends.
Most classmates didn't like me so I had few friends.
I didn’t have confidence and more and more quiet.
I didn’t have confidence and I became quieter and quieter.
But now I have been an outgoing girl.
But now I am an outgoing girl.
and classmates all like to talk with me.
and classmates all like to talk to me.
I usually very busy
I am usually very busy
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