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Your friend had a very disappointing experience while shopping in a store or eating in a restaurant.As a witness,you write a letter of complaint to the department concerned.In this letter,you inevitably need to give an account as to what actually happened.Try to report all the events objectively,that is,let the people involved and their actions speak for themselves as the story moves along.

答案

你的朋友在一间商店购物或在一家餐厅吃东西时有一个非常令人失望的经历.作为一个见证者,你写一封关于抱怨有关部门的信.在这封信中,你需要交代究竟发什么了什么事情.尝试着去客观地去叙述这件事,就是说,让人们参与和用他们的行动来说明这件事.