第五篇,英语小日记看看哪里有错

题目

第五篇,英语小日记看看哪里有错
When I opened the window this morning .It was snowing ! Our city has not snowing for a long time.
In these days it was always overcast .In fect.I think the city in the snow is more beautiful than ever.I love snow. I piled up a snowman on the ground .but unluckly.I got a cold.
I felt uncomfortable. I was ill because of the cold weather. I was tired, sleepy and had no strength. My parents are worried
about my health. in fact, it did not matter.

答案

When I opened the window this morning .It was snowing !Our city (had) not (been) snowing for a long time.
In these days it was always overcast .In (fact).I think the city in the snow is more beautiful than (usual).I love snow.I piled up a snowman on the ground .but unluckily.I got a cold (and) felt uncomfortable because of the cold weather.I was tired,sleepy and had no strength.My parents (were worrying) about my health.(But) in fact,it did not matter.