请懂英语的哥哥姐姐帮我看看我的演讲稿!

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请懂英语的哥哥姐姐帮我看看我的演讲稿!
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Hello,every one!
My name is Li Hao Wei.My English name is Mike Miller.I am a 13 years old boy.I live in the beautiful city of Nanchang.I am in Nanchang Railway No.1 Middle School.And I am in Class15,Grade 7.
In school,my favorite subject is English.Perhaps someone thinks it's difficult to study well.But I like it.Because I think it's very interesting.I belive that if you try your best,everything can be done well.
I also like sports very much.Such as,running,badminton and so on.
There are three people in my family.They're my father,my mother and I.And I like them very much!
OK.This is me .If you like me.Please remember me——a sunny boy!
有错的地方就只出来!

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This me this is me Hello,every one!My name is Li Hao Wei.My English name is Mike Miller.I am a 13 years old boy.I live in the (用a更好)beautiful city of Nanchang.I am in Nanchang Railway No.1 Middle S...