英语作文 My father / mather’s lifestyle

题目

英语作文 My father / mather’s lifestyle
写两段.一段以My father’s lifestyle.
另一段以My mather’s lifestyle.
要求：每段大约60字词!（英语作文）
My father's lifestyle is simple.Every day he gets up early for work and gets home for the family reunion.He doesn't smoke for the health of the family.Sometimes he plays chess with me and sometimes watches TV at night.Then he goes to bed.It is simple because of the love.
并且看一下此英语作文有要修改的地方吗？

答案

第二句中的“everyday”意思是“日常的”应该改为“every day"
在总体还不错,是个好苗子