我朋友帮忙翻译,不知有没有病句.帮忙看下.谢谢

题目

我朋友帮忙翻译,不知有没有病句.帮忙看下.谢谢
I love shopping in the mall every week. This is because I enjoy
wandering, and looking for things what I need such as the people go to the mall
for shopping, too. I love to buy some shirts, and trousers to wearing for any
occasion. Shopping is everybody’s needs.
另外能不能把上面的一段话翻译过来?谢谢

答案

这段文字有语法问题,表达方式也蹩脚,下面我为你改写使句子流畅：
I go to the mall every week.Like most people,I enjoy wandering about in the mall.But I also enjoy shopping,such as buying some shirts and pants and everyday clothing.Everyone needs to shop.
我是加拿大人,英语是我第一语言,前英语老师.