帮忙看以后英语句子是否有语病?

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帮忙看以后英语句子是否有语病?
i have a joke,is from my life ,one day ,my collegue got to the farmer's market,He standing in front of the butcher with another person,they want some meat ,when the butcher cut it ,the another person paid (money) and take the meat away from here,including my colleagues ,after a while ,my colleague asked:where is my meat?The butcher answered him:the rest is yours...

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I have a joke. It is from my experience. One day ,my collegue went to the farmer's market. He was standing in front of the butcher with another person. They wanted some meat. When the butcher cut it ,...