求英语高手帮我看一下哪里有错

题目

求英语高手帮我看一下哪里有错
It is natural that you facing great pressure because you will jion in the most important exam of your life.but should find effective ways and face it bravely.First of all,you should be confidence of yourselfs and make a study plan so as to make full use of your time.secondly you should take some time to do sport and listen to light music.More importantly ifyou study hard,you will make progress which helps you though the college entrance examination

答案

that you facing 这里有问题,没有谓语动词啊；should find 前面没有主语啊；effective ways 后面应当还有“去克服”神马的吧,要不它与face it bravely不能并列啊；yourselfs,s是笔误吧； sport 应加s吧；though肿么可以作谓语动词,应改为PASS吧~