各位高手帮我修改一下推荐信,非常感谢!

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各位高手帮我修改一下推荐信,非常感谢!
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I got familiar with him in the course "MTE" teached by me in 2009. I still remember Mr. Zhang always answered a lot of my difficult questions in my lecture. He had a deep, unique and keen thought in this course. He always tries to link the basic principle of different analysis methods to physics model. He often raises some difficult question and was always persistent to find the answer.
Judging through his outstanding performance at my course, I recommend him with no reservation for your favorable consideration of his application to your Department.
I believe he has the requisite qualification to pursue phd degree in your Department and to work as a teaching or research assistant.
Knowing his desire of doing MTE as his future career, I appreciate his decision to continue his study at Euro where has sublime academic prestige.

答案

楼主的翻译语法基本没什么问题,所以只是在表达方式上做了点修改,希望对你有用.
I got familiar with him in the course "MTE" taught by me in 2009.I still remember Mr.Zhang always answered a lot of my difficult questions in my lecture.He had a deep,unique and keen thought on this course.He always tried to link the basic principles of different analysis methods to physics models.He often raised some profound questions and was always persistent to find the answer.
In view of his outstanding performance in my course,I recommend him without reservation for your favorable consideration on his application to your Department.
I believe he has the requisite qualification to pursue doctor’s degree in your Department and to serve as a teaching or research assistant.
Knowing his desire of taking XXX research as his future career,I appreciate his decision to continue his study in XXX where has sublime academic prestige.