【求助+有赏】求英语达人帮忙润色教师推荐信.

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【求助+有赏】求英语达人帮忙润色教师推荐信.
推荐信是我自己从中文翻译过去的,由于水平有限,肯定不少问题.我希望能改的能地道一些,更像老师的口吻.
DearAdmission Committee,
As an associate professor in CapitalNormal University of China,I have had the pleasure of knowing Yang Danyu for oneyear.At his request,I am more than happy to write this letter ofrecommendation.
I first noticed this student when she applied to me for joining in my programgroup in Undergraduate Scientific and Technological Innovation Project.Accordingto the recommendation from the vice-prexy,I agree to addher in.As she was a freshman then,I gave her some basic tasks and let herfollow the other group members.After a period of observation,I have perceivedthat Yang is talented and responsible student.She takes the program reallyseriously and learns very fast.In each group discussion,she is outstandingbecause of her enthusiasm and enterprise.She is eager to learn more and shethinks hard.Moreover,she is capable to get along with others very well and workwith others pleasantly.S

答案

1.第一句不要用had the pleasure of doing,2.总觉得用at his request 不太好,最好能写出他需要推荐信的理由,以及我很乐意写这样一封信3.第二段第三行 agreed4.在经过一段时期的观察以后 那一句,不用完成时用过去时 t...