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Elderly teacher and young teacher
With the development of society,teachers play an important role in society.
Some students may like elderly teachers` reaching because they think elderly teachers have more teching experience and that they tend to be patient and careful with explanations.
However,I prefer to be tanght by young teachers.Firstly,we students have much in common with them,so they are our friends as well as our teachers.Secondly,they are more energetic and enthusastic.Usually they can make their classes lively and interesting.Besides,they are more ready to accept or create new ideas,including teaching.Thirdly,most young teachers devote themselves to their work,making them teach creatively and effectivelly.
In a word,I prefer young teachers to elderly teachers.

答案

Elderly teacher(s) and young teacher(s)
With the [development of society](social development),teachers play an important role in society.
Some students may like elderly teachers(') [reaching] because they think elderly teachers have more [teching](teaching) experience(s) and [that they] tend to be patient and careful with explanations (given to the students).
However,I prefer to be tanght by young teachers.Firstly,we students have much in common with them,so they are our friends as well as our teachers.Secondly,they are more energetic and enthusastic.Usually they can make their classes lively and interesting.Besides,they are more ready to accept or create new ideas (than elderly teachers),including teaching (techniques).Thirdly,most young teachers devote themselves to their work,making them teach creatively and [effectivelly](effectively).
In a word,I prefer young teachers to elderly teachers.
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