求高手帮忙改篇英语作文
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求高手帮忙改篇英语作文
This is a very interesting cartoon of two football player in game episode.attack player worried about the goal-keeper much strong.but the goal-keeper feeling yourself very small.This cartoon obviously aims at revealing a common and thought-provoking phenomenon:people always are short of confidence.
Why is it the case?the answers seems self-evident.In Chinese traditional culture,nobody can stress modesty too much.therefore,we always show the face of modest,no matter where and what time.so that we lose confidence.take chinese football as an example.as is known to us all,nowadays,chinese football have difficulty to obtain qualification to join the world cup.but in 2002 we are take party in the Japan-korea world cup.beacuse of the team has the support of whole chinese.however,present chinese football increasingly failure,because chinese football team has modesty feeling and worried failure.we know,if one team wanted promote skills,then must be trained with strong team.b
答案
我十分怀疑这是中文拿到网上去直接机器翻译的……还不如给我中文原文来翻译呢.而且有些地方好像说不通……
见下.原文也贴上去了,括号内是我修改的.
还有一个问题,你想说的究竟是谦虚,还是卑微?我看你一直用modest,这是个褒义词,是谦虚.如果是卑微就用humble.看你想表达什么了.
This is a very interesting cartoon of two football player in game episode.attack player worried about the goal-keeper much strong.but the goal-keeper feeling yourself very small.
(This is a very interesting cartoon about two football players in the football match.During this match,the offensive player was worrying that the goal-keeper of the opposing team was very strong.However,this goal-keeper was feeling that he himself was very weak.)
这是一部有趣的动画,关于2个足球运动员.进攻方球员觉得对方守门员很强,但这个守门员却觉得自己很弱.(我是这样理解的,下同)
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This cartoon obviously aims at revealing a common and thought-provoking phenomenon:people always are short of confidence.
OK,不用修改.
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Why is it the case?The answers seems self-evident.In Chinese traditional culture,nobody can stress modesty too much.therefore,we always show the face of modest,no matter where and what time.so that we lose confidence.
(Why is that?The answer seems self-evident.In Chinese traditional culture,modesty is one of its essences.We are taught to show our modesty since we were young.In this way,we are gradually losing confidence)
为什么?答案显而易见.中国传统里,谦虚是其中之一.我们从小就被教导要谦虚.逐渐的,我们就是去了信心.
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take Chinese football as an example.as is known to us all,nowadays,chinese football have difficulty to obtain qualification to join the world cup.but in 2002 we are take party in the Japan-korea world cup.beacuse of the team has the support of whole chinese.
(Taking Chinese football as an example,as is know to all,Chinese football team has difficulty to obtain the qualification of the World Cup.But in 2002,we had once taken part in the World Cup because that the team has achieved the support of all the Chinese!)
拿中国足球队来说吧,众所周知,中国足球队很难取得世界杯资格.但是在2002年,球队曾经参加日韩世界杯!那是因为得到了全国人民的支持.
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however,present chinese football increasingly failure,because chinese football team has modesty feeling and worried failure.we know,if one team wanted promote skills,then must be trained with strong team.but the chinese team always surrender before game.in a way,chinese football lose confidence.
(However,now Chinese football team is losing because Chinese football team is feeling modesty and is worrying about the failure.We all know that if one team wants to improve skill,they should get more experience from the competition against the stronger teams.But the Chinese team always surrender before the game has start.In a word,Chinese football team has lost confidence)
但是,现在中国队因为谦虚而面对更多的失败.我们都知道如果一个队伍想提高技术,他们应该从和强队的比赛中吸取经验.但是中国队未战先投降.总之,他们失去了信心.
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In my view,whatever difficulty or situation we are confronted with,those who have the spirit of confidence are more likely to achieve success.
这段不用改.
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