帮我看看这篇文章有没有严重的语法逻辑错误!

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帮我看看这篇文章有没有严重的语法逻辑错误!
Popularly speaking,intelligence is an agile mind.Intelligence,capacity ,wisdom,though they are in different spelling forms,yet refers to the same thing—the smartness and capacity to learn.From psychological view,intelligence is the level of a man to recognize and do things.Therefore,intelligence is composed of the ability of observation,memorization,analysis,imagination and operation.
Intelligence is the most basic psychological condition for a man to live,study and work,the psychological assurance of keeping dynamic balance of natural environment and social circumstance.Thus intelligence is one of the most important standards of evaluating a man’s psychological health condition.
Generally speaking,ones that with extraordinary intelligence and that of low intelligence just take a small fraction.
Intelligence of most people is ordinary.Extraordinary intelligence refers to that the intelligence is above the average level of the ordinary.And extraordi

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第一句就不对.intelligence是不可数的,怎么能是an agile mind,何况an agile mind也不能作为前者的定义或诠释.Therefore,intelligence is composed of abilitIES of observation,memorY,analysis,imagination and ope...