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I really don't konw how is everything happen in my world.There was a guy rushing into my hart without my passport.
I could not move my eyes from him.He is the best man in my world.Even though i don't have smart apperance like ather girls,i still love him.
He fell in love with a girl in our class when colleage life had just begun.I really wondered why they getting together like this so fast.When i saw them with such sweet i felt sad,so sad.But i can't make my sadness stand out.Like this,day after day.I had ever be the posswoman for them.An apple from my hand to him.And finally they said gooy-bye to each other from this tearm.Why?The girl felt love with another boy in our class.Should i be happy?
No.another girl in our department went together with him.Oh my god,i can't believe this.Thing got strange,they broken off after a week.I did not know what was thinking in his mind.So what big deal!I still love him at least.
I had told him my idea,he know i love him but he doesn't give me any answer until then.

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I really don't konw how everything HAS happenED in my world.There was a guy rushing into my hEart without my passport.
I could not move my eyes from him.He is the best man in my world.Even though I don't have smart appeArance like Other girls,i still love him.
He fell in love with a girl in our class when colleage life just BEGAN.I really wondered why they WERE getting together like this so fast.When i saw them TOGETHER,sweet AND CLOSE,I felt sad,so sad.But i COULD NOT SHOW my sadness.
Day after day.I ACTED AS A DELIVERY LADY for them.An apple from my hand to him.And finally they said gooy-bye to each other IN this tearm.Why?The girl FELL IN love with another boy in our class.Should i be happy?
No.another girl in our department went together with him.Oh my god,i COULD NOT believe this.ThingS got strange AND they BROKE off after a week.I did not know what was ON his mind.So what A big deal!I still loveD him at least.
I had told him OF MY LOVE,AND HE KNEW i loveD him but he DIDN'T give me any answer until then.