请帮我检查我写得这篇英文短文,感觉有很多文法上的错误.

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请帮我检查我写得这篇英文短文,感觉有很多文法上的错误.
For me,the quality I value most in a friend is that she has a lot in common with me.Because I believe if you have a friend who has something in common,like favorite idols,interests,habits,sports,ideas,and personality.We will get along with each other.If we hold differing views,I think we quarrel but soon reconcile.If 有这样的朋友在身边,I will not feel lonely in my life.

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For me,the quality I value most of a friend is that she has a lot in common with me.好像这样更好吧：the quality of a friend,which I value most,is that she ……interest做兴趣讲是不可数名词,应该去s,like...