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高手帮我改六级作文
The Digital Age
Currently, it is widely acknowledgeable that digital age is approaching. A wealth of products is used in campus life, on a football team, in class and so on. Hence a heated debate on how digital products have impacts on our daily life is soaring.
People who are at work hold that they offer so much convenience while others who are staying in school are in favor of them in that they can bring them a good life and keep them relaxed. On the other hand, they are symbols of modern society, which focuses on the quality of life. When they have an extremely essential influence on people’s daily life, people will feel comfortable.
Simply put, I am proud of the development of them. We will be faced up with the gorgeous prospect and enjoy the prosperity they bring. The digital age will be in harmony with human beings and eliminate the conventional products. What we may comply with is an unusual century which complies with a glazing station.

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