帮我看看我的英语句子有没语病

题目

帮我看看我的英语句子有没语病
1.What’s you strong points and weak points?My forte is a strong sense of responsibility
Things are very concerned for the work
But sometimes I'm not very good temper
Relatively easy to get angry
2.Why do/don’t you want to be a salesman?•I do not want to become a salesman
•Because i think salesman only can earn little money,maybe i can not do something i like•Very hard to do a salesman 3.How do you spend your time outside classes?
•I will go out for a walk.•Look at the scenery•Or go to play basketball and listen to music to pass the boring time•4.How do you handle pressure?•I will listen to some music to relax yourself•To make myself not to think of something else•Then eat your favorite foods•Have a look yourself like novels•So slowly reduce the pressure of their own 5.The advantages and disadvantages of staying in Guang Zhou?•Stay in Guang Zhou ,can eat to much food you can not eat in other city ,but i also think Guang Zhou is too noise and the people is busy.
•And poor air Guangzhou
看我的答案有没语病
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答案

不需要看了,你这个考试 应该过不了,如果是 类似 托业口语 试题,那你的逻辑就是汉语的 ,而且还有语病,多准备准备吧
如果是只未来参加 公司 面试 如果面试的是中国人那你还有希望 如果有老外坐镇 我恐怕他根本不懂你在说什么.