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谁帮我改改这段英语作文啊
On one hand,the thought that people should take action now rather than later is advocated by a lot of young people.For example,there are more and more young people who have high educational background to want to seek a relatively well-paid job.Therefore,if you want to get the opportunity,you have to take an action in a short time such as quickly making decision,rapidly preparing a strategy for interview and so on.In this way,you could enjoy a competitive edge in this faster-rhythm-society.
这段想表达这个思想：people should take action now rather than later

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On one hand,a lot of young people advocate the idea of taking prompt actions rather than later.For example,more and more young people with higher education are seeking relatively well-paid jobs.Theref...