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I'd also like to thank your,it was terrible when earthquake finish ,I remember thousand of families were killed and many children were left without parents,The number of people who were killed or injued reached more than 4000000,Ifelt not long after that your start hard built your home.
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I'd like to thank you.After the earthquake,it looked horrible everywhere.I heard that thousands of houses were destroyed,too many people were killed by this disaster.Lots of children became orphans.Th...