英语翻译

题目

英语翻译
下周一(11/16)您会对我面试,首先很感谢您给我的机会!
You will interview me next Monday,first of all,thanks for your good chance!
请问当天您大概几点比较方便,我先预约对应时间的会议室.
Excuse me,which time are you free that day,I will book the meeting room first!
自己写出来的总感觉有点不大对头,呵呵,

答案

.I'll have an interview with you next Monday.First of all,I'd like to say thank you for giving me such a good chance.I am wondering when you will be free that day.I can book a meeting room in advance.
你是在写信吗?最好注意下语气和上下文连接,不要显得太突兀.多用些语气词,显得礼貌谦逊些.