几句英文,帮我看看哪里能改改的

题目

几句英文,帮我看看哪里能改改的
-Firstly,a supplier which offers raw materials or goods with better quality is considerable.
-It will indirectly affects the company’s image and sales as the finished products or service are based on them.
-Secondly ,less important costs is also an irreplaceable element.
-Not only about the product costs ,but also include transportation costs ,and some times customs duties.
-That means a supplier which provides the most reasonable price and located nearest the company is likely to be the ideal one
-This is a direct way to increase the profit.

答案

Firstly,a supplier which offers raw materials or goods with better quality is considerable.
-It will affects the company’s image and sales indirectly as the finished products or service are based on them.
-Secondly ,less important costs is also an irreplaceable element.
-Not only the product costs ,but also the transportation costs ,and some times customs duties.
-That means the supplier which provides the most reasonable price and located nearest to the company is likely to be the best fit
-This is a direct way to increase the profit.