请教这个英文句子有语法错误吗

题目

请教这个英文句子有语法错误吗
The tower aerial far away,the tiles on the roofs,the marble sculpture on the grass and even the tan wooden house whose wood texture could be distinctly observed.

答案

那个匿名的哥们改了之后是没有语法错误了 不过原来的语义就缺失了
With the tower aerial far away,the tiles on the roofs,the marble sculpture on the grass,even the tan wooden house whose wood texture could be distinctly observed.
这样就好些了
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