About the Thesis Statement~

题目

About the Thesis Statement~
如果我的文章要写consumer为电子产品延保前应该考虑什么,这个Thesis statement够清楚吗?
The aim of the essay is to give the considerations before consumers decide to extend warranty.
因为Thesis statement是在introduction那段的最后一句,所以想要引出下文的那种感觉

答案

This essay provides a list of issues that a consumer needs to consider before deciding to extend a product warranty.1.我不觉得aim用在这里很合适,又想不出更合适的,干脆不用.2.consideration和decide都是con...