谁能帮我改改这篇英文信,因该有很多错

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谁能帮我改改这篇英文信,因该有很多错
If you recive my little,It's fortunate,because you didn't leave me your class number ,You just gave me your gamertag for PS3 ,but I don't have a PS3,I just have a PSP,besides I seldom play video games.
Next year ,I will enter a college ,so this year,I will be very busy,I have to study hard,I always hard working,but It's hard for me to make some improving.Sometimes I blame myself I'm useless.Do you trouble with your studying?
In my spare time ,I'd like to do some reading,I enjoy reading my magazine which about scince ,and I also read some essay.My composition is not very outstanding,so I want to improve it by reading.Do you like scince?I sometimes watch "Descovery"and"National Geograpy"and I dream to be a scintest.Tell me what you want to do in the fulture.I'm looking forward to hearing from you.my e-mail is

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首先 中文就有问题 “应该”而不是“因该”- -第一段little?是letter吧class number 一班没有这样用的此外,这一段表达的意思不明,有些不知所云.第二段 make some improving 应该是 make progressI blame myself I'm ...