各位牛人评评这篇托福作文能得多少分?这就是我现在最好的水平.到达25-29大概还要复习多久?

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各位牛人评评这篇托福作文能得多少分?这就是我现在最好的水平.到达25-29大概还要复习多久?
Computers vs traditional schools
Different people will hold different opinions about studying at home or studying at school.personally I would prefer to study at traditional schools.because they have more advantages,such as experienced teachers,disciplined learning and good facilities.
One hand,schools provide us experienced teachers which know about us most.they can teach us well according to our level and answer our questions immediately when we are studying in the classroom.whereas if we study at home,the only thing we can do is to listen the voice and we don’t have any chance to ask the teacher questions.this process seems like we are taught by machines without thinking or personal ideas.so we can’t truly grasp the knowledge and apply them to practice.
On the other hand,schools also provide us disciplined learning.in order to develop us ability extensively,the subjects are arranged equally at school.but at home,most of

答案

大概看了一样,就是中规中矩,没有自己的亮点··