英语翻译

题目

英语翻译
我想表达的意思是：我已经仔细阅读了要求并修改了论文.但由于我英语差而且没有经验,可能还是有一些错误,如果有,请指出.我将严格按您的建议修改.
我写的是：I have read the Instructions to authors kindly and revised Ms carefully.However,because my poor English and little experience,there may be some mistakes,please excuse me and point out ,if any.I will correct the Ms strictly as per the suggestion.
总感觉有点汉语化,怎么改呢

答案

I had read the Instructions to authors carefully and then revised my Ms.However, because my English is not very good and I have little experience,there may still be some mistakes.Please excuse me and point them out.I'll correct the Ms with your suggestions.
这是修改后的版本.